However, APA is often confusing to students having to use it, and can lead to frustration and an inability to meet the requirements required by their programs.
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What will your editor do? Make direct improvements to your titles and headings Comment on the organization of your chapters, sections and paragraphs Ensure that the individual chapters and sections support the main goal Check that every chapter contains the right information Highlight repetition and redundancy Structure Checklists General Structure Checklist The document is organized in such a way that the central theme is apparent to the reader.
I recommend introducing your central theme — the need for pharmaceutical trials to include more diverse participants — earlier in your paper. This way, your reader understands what your paper is about from the very beginning. See my comments for specific suggestions. The text is organized in a logical and appropriate manner chapters, sections and paragraphs.
As you revise, be sure to clearly link each section to your central theme or research question. This will help you build strong, interconnected arguments.
The text is without repetition.
You've struck a nice balance between restating main ideas to help your readers follow along and avoiding unnecessary repetition that might distract or bore readers. The text is without redundancies.
The titles and headings are adequate, correct and consistent. A strong title should be informative, striking and appropriate. Your title is definitely striking. However, it could be more informative. I recommend rephrasing your title to specify the central theme of your paper.
For more tips, check out this article: Preface The preface is no longer than four or five paragraphs. Great job with this section — you've thanked those people who played an especially important role in your work, and you've kept the tone professional throughout. Only people who have actually helped have been thanked.
The thanks follow a functional order. Those who have contributed the most are named first. The use of first and last names is consistent.
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